Disadvantages living in Jakarta
As we know living in a big city especially in Jakarta you will find a lot of trouble. There are some disadvantages when you living in Jakarta. The first is about pollution, the pollution is all come from a factory and the vehicle. The pollution in Jakarta is almost stay in danger zone, mostly because there not enough trees and many vehicle. Next is the traffic in Jakarta, the busiest time in Jakarta is always happened at 7.00-10.00am and 17.00-19.00pm. The last is about their culture, becausethe citizen mostly already forgets about their own culture after they move to Jakarta the individuality is evolving highly. There always have some problem living in a big city. Pollution, traffic and individuality are the common trouble problem which usually we met in our usual day.
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